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Tina ([personal profile] tempusfrangit) wrote2011-01-18 04:18 am

Help please?

Can anyone look over an app for me please? That isn't the obvious and awesome two that I've already used (THANK YOU ONE AGAIN YOU TWO!)

It's Sanctuary but you really don't have to know the canon, I just need to know where I'm going wrong.

[identity profile] distant-flicker.livejournal.com 2011-01-18 05:50 am (UTC)(link)
I don't know Sanctuary, but I can give it a once-over?

[identity profile] butterflysteve.livejournal.com 2011-01-18 09:32 am (UTC)(link)
Yay! Please, I'll sent it over to you know.

YOU'RE AWESOME.
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[personal profile] sheikah 2011-01-18 11:26 am (UTC)(link)
Lol I wish I could find a gif of the scene where Big Guy cups Henry's face and is all, "We are on this journey together!" BECAUSE THAT IS HOW I FEEL DAMMIT.

[identity profile] butterflysteve.livejournal.com 2011-01-18 12:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Image (http://s279.photobucket.com/albums/kk126/ellegiselle/?action=view&current=journeytogether.jpg)
WE ARE ON THIS JOURNEY TOGETHER.

Nikola: We are on this journey together.
Will: Oh, god he's going to get us killed.
Helen: Just smile and nod Will. Smile and nod.
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[personal profile] notsocommon 2011-01-18 02:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Lol Will looks so annoyed.

[identity profile] butterflysteve.livejournal.com 2011-01-18 02:23 pm (UTC)(link)
I know, I love it. :D
I'm scrolling through Sanctuary screencaps going love it, love it, love it.
And just in case I'm going to go put Nikola on reserve now so at least I have a marker for him.
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[personal profile] notsocommon 2011-01-18 02:39 pm (UTC)(link)
We will make it work, promise!

[identity profile] butterflysteve.livejournal.com 2011-01-18 03:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Well he's on reserve now anyway so breath of relief there. I've got aqua aerobics in a bit, I'll come back and start working on the edit after that. Or maybe die a little, haven't figured out which yet.
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[personal profile] notsocommon 2011-01-18 03:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Well I think the good stuff is there, it needs to be tweaked. I wouldn't scrap it completely

[identity profile] butterflysteve.livejournal.com 2011-01-18 05:10 pm (UTC)(link)
I won't, I'm going to tweak it about and see what I can do with it.

Also, randomly I really want to write always-a-female!Nikola Helen/Nikola for the battle. Hmmm, I'm going to work on the app and this probably when I get back in.
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[personal profile] notsocommon 2011-01-18 05:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooo I approve of this.

[identity profile] distant-flicker.livejournal.com 2011-01-18 05:59 pm (UTC)(link)
I AM SO AWESOME THAT IT TOOK ME EIGHT HOURS TO WAKE UP AND GET THE EMAIL!

[identity profile] butterflysteve.livejournal.com 2011-01-18 06:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Sharp masculine suits, condescending smirks, warm soft hands wrapped around Helen's waist, soft lips and lots and lots of wine me thinks. I'm just deciding which era to set it in. I'm leaning towards 19th century, 1940's or modern with Will being all... Tesla was a woman?! And Helen being all Oh yes whilst Will goes... wait you and Nikola? *MIND EXPLODES*
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[personal profile] notsocommon 2011-01-18 06:09 pm (UTC)(link)
I think it'd work as late 30s or 40s with a noir feel to it